Experimental commercial video for my newest model. Is it any good? or a waste of time?

Hello everybody.

I am new when it comes to animation and the making of video’s. However, as an experiment I have made a commercial/showcase video for my newest model.

https://www.cgtrader.com/3d-models/space/planet/ice-planet-001-alfa

Any feedback is appreciated.

Is this a good idea? what should be done differently? is the music to much? Or do you think it is a complete waste of time and I should just make more models rather then video’s?

Thanks in advance

Polymath maniac.